Tiger and Toad
by Sean Baxter
I though this was very good sean... well done!!! I thought that 'tiger helped him down' was a bit odd as thought he was already down off the bed - maybe mentioning he was stuck upside down...? xx
posted at 05:14am Nov 18 PST
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